Inori Alice-chi.
Mensagens : 6628 Idade : 30 Localização : In Kenji's heart ♥
| Assunto: [sem título] Sáb Set 10, 2011 12:55 pm | |
| Isto é só uma historiazinha que eu escrevo de vez em quando, baseada em Alice in Wonderland ♥ Quando pensar num título, mudo o nome do tópico ;3 Btw, está em inglês ~ - Spoiler:
One day, after a long walk through the town, a young girl with long black hair and crimson eyes, found herself entering a forest. And she was now lost. However, she kept walking and walking, towards the center of that forest. There, she found a very interesting thing. Shinning in the water, under a waterfall was a golden stone. She came close and held it in her hands; and the stone started to emit a strange glow. Suddenly, everything around her turned white. Then golden. The silver. And finally black, as she fell asleep. When she woke up, she was in a wonderful garden and she was wearing a black and red lolita-styled dress, with white-and-black-stripped socks and red shoes. She also had her hair pulled into two pigtails, with red and white ribbons. The girl felt really embaressed with that outfit but she really didn't have time to worry about that, because it suddenly started to rain intensivly. She ran and ran, until she found a huge tree, where she could take shelter. As soon as she hid under it, the rain stopped. Everything was then dry and it was very sunny, like it didn't rain at all. The girl was very annoyed by that fact. Then, another strange thing happened. When she looked around, a black rabbit, wearing red clothes, and a white rabbit, wearing blue clothes, were approching her. They were talking really fast, so she couldn't understand most what they were saying; but, she did catch a few phrases - "Too late, too late" and "We need to hurry up. We must not make the Queen wait.". They hopped away, leaving the girl alone, like they didn't even notice her. As she walked towards the direction in which the rabbits went, she found something on the ground. She picked it up; it was golden pocket-watch, that they probably dropped. It marked 2 (p.m.) o'clock. She pictured that the rabbits went to have lunch with the so-called 'Queen', since they were hungry - like she was. Still confused, she walked along a yellow road, trying to follow the rabbits. "They probably didn't even notice me! Or they were scared and ran away?" - she thought. The girl then smiled and continued walking. Meanwhile, the sun set.
Quando passar mais para o computador, posto~ | |
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Vichan seiyuu.
Mensagens : 1556 Idade : 27 Localização : Base da Across
| Assunto: Re: [sem título] Seg Nov 28, 2011 4:05 pm | |
| Fofa a história! Adoro fanfics escritas em inglês, mas como meus conhecimentos sobre a lingua ainda se encontram em desenvolvimento, tenho um pouco de dificuldade de ler as histórias, pois a maioria tem vocábulos muito rebuscados.
Mas você escreveu com simplicidade, gostei de ler. Eu quase podia ver as imagens passando na minha frente. Anyway, espero que poste logo o próximo.
- Impressão minha ou tudo fica mais sedução quando se escreve em inglês? | |
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Inori Alice-chi.
Mensagens : 6628 Idade : 30 Localização : In Kenji's heart ♥
| Assunto: Re: [sem título] Seg Nov 28, 2011 5:09 pm | |
| - Vi-chan escreveu:
- Fofa a história!
Adoro fanfics escritas em inglês, mas como meus conhecimentos sobre a lingua ainda se encontram em desenvolvimento, tenho um pouco de dificuldade de ler as histórias, pois a maioria tem vocábulos muito rebuscados.
Mas você escreveu com simplicidade, gostei de ler. Eu quase podia ver as imagens passando na minha frente. Anyway, espero que poste logo o próximo.
- Impressão minha ou tudo fica mais sedução quando se escreve em inglês? Tenho passado mais da história para o pc, hei-de postar~ Só vou escrevendo nos tempos livres, a lápis, num caderno velho xD Obrigada :3 - Fica sim, por isso mesmo escrevo em inglês <3 | |
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